A Surprise Birthday Party

 A Surprise Birthday Party

    Amanda has three good friends. The four girls have been very good friends since they were in Primary Three. Once, Amanda walked into the classroom where her three best friends were sitting. They were talking and laughing over a notebook. When they saw Amanda, they closed the notebook and kept quiet.

    Amanda felt hurt. She thought that they had been talking about her. She asked them what they were talking about but they refused to tell her. Amanda was very upset and thought that maybe her best friends were not true friends after all. True friends would keep no secrets from each other. 

    Later on, Amanda went home, still feeling demoralized at being rejected by her friends. She opened the door and walked in feeling disheartened. "Surprise!" shouted many voices. Her three best friends were waiting for her with a lighted birthday cake! Many of her other classmates and friends were also there to celebrate her birthday.

    Amanda was so touched that tears rolled down her cheeks. She hugged her best friends. Amanda realised that the love her friends had for her was true and sincere. She vowed to never doubt them again.

The End

Written on 24 July 2022

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  1. Shavonne24 June 2022 at 12:49

    Hope everyone enjoyed this story! Do remember to comment and give me some feedback (if any) so that I can improve this story!😀

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  2. Issy10 August 2022 at 16:04

    Maybe at the start of the story you could mention it was her birthday so that it will make her feel all the more sad that she was being excluded on her birthday.

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